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All Deviations


The frustrated agonizings of a mind
undone,
life, be thou though a cruel mistress
yet,
and she grins,
she has a smile like her mother,
a Jezebelle, a barracuda.
and her eyes are pitch,
and her fingers are handles, needles,
and she will drag you down,
break you,
take you,
shake you to your bloody broken bones.
i dreamt the ceiling was raining
all ace of spades.
and splat spat fire and brimstone
the world became a chrysallis of ice,
a fragile crystal-lest the war break not your surface--!
i shall wait.
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just so's ya'nno 'm not dead.
'cause some people were wondering.
am slow and unmotivated in replying to comments / writing bigger stuff lately.
sorry. all you get is a poem today. :lol:; :music:
enjoy.

-A.C.
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~jazz-alice:iconjazz-alice: Apr 6, 2008, 9:18:01 PM Mood: Awestruck
You write amazingly. It's astoundingly beautiful and quite unique.
*SmallChange:iconSmallChange: Apr 7, 2008, 4:24:27 AM
Pretty.

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*Lumaris:iconLumaris: Apr 7, 2008, 6:39:05 AM
Beautiful and wonderfully written. :wow: You're a great writer!

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*Voodoofish:iconVoodoofish: Apr 7, 2008, 7:39:12 AM
Prettyful. Sounds like song lyrics. *electric guitar riff~*

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~KyoukiSumeragi:iconKyoukiSumeragi: Apr 7, 2008, 9:19:00 AM
I didn't think you were gone :) Could be because I leave something of yours in my inboxes so it feels like I always have Plea floating around

Good job on the poem, very lyrical

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"The law of gravity: it doesn't matter whether you're a good person or a bad person, you're going to hit the ground."
~Rev. Dr. Michael Beckwith in "The Secret"
~NDean:iconNDean: Apr 7, 2008, 10:14:02 AM
fantastic... truly wonderful

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*CrimsonBandit:iconCrimsonBandit: Apr 7, 2008, 11:43:30 AM
You still amaze me with how much detail and emotion you have in your poems! This is beautiful! :)

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'How's that for a slice of fried gold?'
*Ghost-of-Ink:iconGhost-of-Ink: Apr 7, 2008, 12:04:13 PM
:hug: You're alive, Plea! :heart:

Love your work Plea, no matter how many words are in it. Same with this, it really suits my mood today.
=yourpleasantdarkness:iconyourpleasantdarkness: Apr 12, 2008, 6:36:26 AM
:'x Thank you so much, it's wonderful to hear from a new commentor. I'm glad you liked it.

-A.C.

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No matter how subtle the wizard, a knife between his shoulderblades will seriously cramp his style.
-- Vlad Taltos (Writer: Steven Brust)